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Essays – Narration of Literary Stories

William H. Coles


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Definitions

To learn the skill of narrating a story in fiction, authors, teachers, and students must know what words mean and not confuse terms or use them interchangeably.  Note, in particular, the difference in meanings of narrative the noun and narrative the adjective, narrator and character, and literary fiction and memoir.

  • Narrate v: to give an account of something in detail.
  • Narrator n: somebody who tells a story or gives an account of something.
  • Character n: one of the people portrayed in a story.
  • Narration n: the act of telling a story or giving an account of something.
  • Narrative (1)  n: an account of a sequence of events in the order in which they happened.
  • Narrative (2)  n: a discussion or speech about the policies, opinions, or proposals of a political party.  The senator's narrative  . . .
  • Narrative adj: having aim or purpose of telling a story, or involving the art of story telling.
  • Author n: the creator or originator of something.
  • Fiction — stories that describe imaginary people and events.
  • Literary fiction — serious, character-based fiction as opposed to genre or popular fiction, which are plot based.
  • Story — an account of a series of events.
  • Memoir — an account of events written from personal knowledge.
  • Autobiography — an account of someone’s life written by that person.
  • Biography — an account of someone’s life written by another person.
  • Creative nonfiction — literary or narrative journalism, using literary skills in writing nonfiction.

In scene vs. narrative telling

Authors must clarify their own thinking about how to provide story information: 1) story advanced by telling a sequence of events, 2) in scene reader involvement by showing character action, 3) descriptive narrative, 4) dialogue, 5) images and setting.   Show-don’t-tell has been the imperative in literary fiction for centuries, but increasingly fewer authors respond.  The result is fewer good stories created as an art form.

Point of view

Character points of view are used by a narrator to tell a story.  First person and third person are most commonly used. (Second person is trendy but rarely provides lasting reader satisfaction necessary for great storytelling.) The narrator has a point of view that may be used for improving time management of story progression or for information that is not within the reasonable range of the character’s senses, memory (life experiences), education, or intelligence.  Point of view has many definitions. Most commonly writers think of point of view as 1) a position in space, time, or development from which something is considered. But point of view can also be 2) a manner of evaluating something, or 3) a reasoned opinion about something.  In essence, a character point of view is not simply a position for considering physical action in a story.  It is character-revealing way for the narrator to present story information to the reader.  And there are complexities of point of view that, if not appreciated or if mismanaged, will cause the reader to unnecessarily question the character’s reliability—and credibility.  (It is not helpful to think of a point of view in story telling as a camera, as is often taught. Evaluating story action and opinions are also involved, things a camera does not do.  This broad, all-definitions, approach to point of view is especially useful when considering use of narrator and character points of view together. )

Example: point of view.

I despised Amy. She was beautiful, I’ll give her that, but she thought the world revolved around her–that God made other people to admire her. Never once did she think of me, or anyone, as a human with feelings.

The structure of this paragraph is common, and acceptable to many readers.  Yet it has a complexity of point of view that require a reader to suspend disbelief in the character’s capabilities.  In essence, telling what Amy thought and wanted is not within reasonable boundaries of the 1st person point of view. Yet it is necessary information, which is best thought of as narrator information since a narrator knows all about the story world and has the reader-acceptable gift of knowing what all characters think.  Information provided through a character—first or third person–that is not reasonable makes that character unreliable, either intentionally or unintentionally.  A character does not know the truth of Amy’s thoughts, and also shows arrogance in telling the reader these impossibilities.  These may not be aspects of the character the author always wants to imply.  However, it is perfectly reasonable, and often necessary, to use a first person character as the more story story-wise narrator.  But it must not be accidental, and it must be consistent for the story being written.

In general, it is useful to resist thinking that unraveling complexities of point of view is unnecessary . . . the if-it works-and-I wrote-it, it-must-be-good approach to creating fictional stories.  Authors must be aware of the subtle and complex layers of point of view so that they can use point of view effectively. It is inescapable. Well-reasoned opinions about point of view are essential for all authors who want to be in control of the story telling process and what they provide for a reader.

Voice

Voice and point of view, although related, must not be equated.  Voice is everything a character does and says that helps identify the character.  Point of view is the microscopic (close) or telescopic (distant) way a character delivers story information.  And while characters deliver story information in their own voice, a narrator is telling the story—even in first person.

Principles of narration.

Great stories are told by a narrator, not a character.Narration of a story and point of view are separate, and the narrator uses a point of view to deliver the story.  (When done seamlessly, the reader becomes engrossed and does not register how the narrator is delivering story information, either directly or through a character.  A narrator is present both in first person or third person points of view, although the narrator may be more submerged in 1st person point of view.) A narrator is created by an author but should be thought of as a distinct intellect who is telling the story.

Thinking of oral story tradition when writing

In academic discussions and workshops, terms are frequently used without common understanding as to their meaning.  It is a practice that has resulted in entire careers riddled with confusions about the basics of storytelling—and the unique problems in the written story. It is often helpful, in discussions of point of view and narrators, to think to an oral storytelling tradition.  The storyteller is always telling the story.  And the teller is often not the author of the story and is in control of narrative passages, action, dialog, and internal reflection.

At times, the storyteller relies on suspension of disbelief—that the storyteller could know the information presented—to increase tension and infuse drama.  And listeners can have transcendence as if they were within the character’s living self.  Imagine Ornesto, a storyteller, telling Henry James’s story, “Turn of the Screw,” in 2007 to a high school literature class. James published “Turn of the Screw,” in 1898. Ornesto, to be effective in his dramatization will make the presentation as familiar to his contemporary (2007) audience as possible.  Ornesto, telling a story already open to decades of interpretations, will tell it in his way, in 2007.  He might dip into Flora or Mile’s minds choosing most relevant facts for his purpose, or characterize Mrs. Grose with room left for the 2007 listeners to fill in their own details.  Ornesto will make Peter Quint as evil as he can, choosing his words (mostly if not all from James) for best effect.

Ornesto is the narrator—knowing all about the story world and choosing story facts from a limited story-world perspective.  (James is considered the creator of the story world with knowledge outside the story world.) Note that as narrator, Ornesto will make the best choices about story information for his audience. It is this separation advantage of author from narrator from character(s)that fiction writers often ignore.  Now Ornesto, to keep his story moving, will narrate, and may well use different points of view, other than what author Henry James would, to be effective. Here is a useful rule: although the fiction author writes the story, the author should not tell the story.  The narrator tells the story (that is created by the author) and moves within the limits of the story world.  And the narrator uses the narrator’s voice for certain story information, and uses character point of view—or points of view—to deliver other story content.  This prevents stray author ideas into the story.  There are two difficult concepts to digest: 1) by clear conceptualization of author-narrator-character delivered information, authors add ease to reader understanding, and 2) when contemporary writers choose a single character’s point of view exclusively as if it were a selective filter, they often limit the potential of the story.

Terms

Narrator intrusion

Narrators contribute to the story presentation and direct decisions about character contribution.  To call a narrator’s contribution an intrusion to be excised from the story creates a diversion to excuse the author’s inability to write effective prose.  But good judgment is necessary.  If narrator information does not fit into the continuous fictional dream of the story provided for the reader at that moment, it is an intrusion and should not be included.  Authors must use narrative techniques while remaining true to quality story telling.

Authorial intrusion

Any thought, opinion, emotion of the author in a story should be removed as detrimental to creating a story as an art form. Most common are political ideas or needs to comment on real world social change.  (The story may deal with these issues, but through action enlightenment, not narrative emotional descriptions.) Author intrusion often borders on essay and propaganda and is not compatible with great stories. (This does not mean that themes and meaning important to the author are not a integral part of great stories.  They are, but they are expressed through careful story structure and skillful, craft-savvy presentation.)  It is important that the authorial morality be understood and be consistent.  All good literary stories are constructed on a moral framework that is easily perceived by the reader.  Moral fiction is the cardiovascular system of a literary fictional story, and is provided by the author as a matrix in which the characters and narrator act.

1st person point of view is the same as the narrator

When the narrator collapses into the first person character, although it seems logical and acceptable, it sets up often-unaddressed questions–but perceived questions–in the reader’s mind as to who is telling the story, credibility of the narrator, and whether the suspension of disbelief should be continued.  Many contemporary stories don't differentiate information sources and if the information delivered is credible from the source.  For example, in first-person in-scene construction of a story passage, to be accurate, the first person can only tell and comment on what is happening in the story within the range of five senses at the the moment in story time.  Along the same line, if the first person comments on the past, it has to be within the intellectual capabilities, memory for story events, and when speculating, within the characters capabilities and established sensitivities.  But narrators are different.  Every narrator tells about something that has happened, that is from a period where time has progressed, knowledge has increased, history expanded, understanding explored.   For a reader to accept information outside the logical thoughts and perceptions of the first person character, the reader must believe the first person character is older and looking back on the story–that is wiser and acting as a narrator–or accept a narrator's contribution to the a story as created by the author to help the reader understand the story.  This takes considerable author skill, which most authors don't consider using a sliding scale of reliability for credible information delivery with little concern for logic.  Probably few readers care about details.  But many readers stop reading when they think the writing is bad, and bad fiction can come from the lack of clarity in story telling that confusion over first person/narrator relationships can cause.

Close (or tight) vs. distant character points of view

The sense of the reader of how close the character is to the story action is created by syntax, word choice, and ideation.  This is true in all choices for story including presentation, dialog, narration, description, internal reflection, even exposition. As a character seems more distant from the action, they function more and more as a narrator.  The author who recognizes character and narrator information in close and distant terms is able to present more consistent voicings, more in-depth character reliability, easier grasped imagery, and will be in better control of the writing process.  In essence, use of narrator information (that is information not filtered through a character point of view) provides flexibility to provide essential story information that is outside the character senses and knowledge and/or intellectual capabilities.  This is useful technique in all but the rare story.

Narrator point of view

The narrator point of view is not a silo in a field of character-point-of-view silos.  Narrators tell stories, and it is not useful to consider a narrator point of view as similar too—or equivalent—to a character’s point of view.  Narrators float above the story in a hot air balloon with useful overviews that characters cannot achieve.

Omniscient narrator. (Omniscient: knowing everything.)

Narrators know only about their story worlds. They know more than is told in the story by a character but they do not know all that the author knows and they should not tell what the author knows and believes outside the story world.  It is an important distinction for an author who wants to tell stories clearly, logically, and effectively.

Omniscient author

This implies the author knows all truths.  Impossible.  Authors know only what they perceive of their world and think in their insular minds, and it is never omniscient.  Omniscience is reserved for deities.  To apply "omniscient" knowledge to a story becomes distracting and ineffective for story.

Story world

Story world is restricted, selective, purposeful, intense, directed and never random.  It is where the characters act and it is what the narrator delivers to the reader.  In good fiction, its boundaries are sacrosanct and should not be violated.

Narrator epiphany

In general, narrators tell stories and may or may not change.  Usually characters change from revelations or changes in the way they think about something brought about by story action.  Narrators tell a story and do not always change significantly.  But there are many exceptions.  Many stories have very effective narrators blessed with revelations and reversal in thinking that may be or may not be similar to a character.  Note too that when the author is considered to be equal to the narrator, a narrator enlightenment is awkward if not often impossible.  Strong ironic meaning is also often lost when there is loss of character and narrator distinction.  As a useful rule, how characters and sometimes narrators change in a story needs to be under the author’s control and thoroughly considered before and during writing, and in revision.

Time line and point of view

A character’s point of view changes with the advancement of the story time (as does every human).  (Three elements of point of view, all of which are a part of our understanding of point of view: position in space or time, a mental attitude or opinion, a manner of evaluating.)

Multiple 3rd person points of view equals omniscient point of view

Points of view in a story are not spices in a stew that give a blended effect. Points of view are pears, figs, cashews, marshmallows, all in a bowl that are consumed separately with sometimes memorable and always distinct individual effects that contribute to the whole experience of eating. Omniscient point of view is not a term equal to multiple points of view, but is often implied as equal in discussions of the craft of writing.


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11 Responses to “Essays – Narration of Literary Stories”

  1. Importance of the Narrator | Bound to Be the Worst Blog Says:

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  2. Tshidi Tshabalala Says:

    wow…this essay really hepled me a lot as i was still struggling with understanding the narrator and storyteller concepts. thanx! im sure il nail my exam *smiles*

  3. Assignment 3. Create a Literary Story » Literary Fiction Workshop Says:

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  4. david stringer Says:

    Thank you William. I belong to a "beginning writers" group here in Australia and I recently got 12 fine critiques from my fellow members. All were very favourable; there were constructive criticisms which I have taken on board, but not one mentioned the multiple pov's and everyone loved the characters, so I wasn't too shallow there, (i hope!!). This criticism regards 4 main pov characters seems to come only from experienced MS assessors.

  5. admin Says:

    So many stories actually demand that story information, to be effective, be delivered through multiple sources. Multiple points of view help solve credibility issues, reliability issues, and can blunt the need for suspension of disbelief. I would venture that a majority of stories would benefit by the skillful use of sophisticated narration through various points of view. However, some stories may also demand, for effectiveness, the world viewed by limited number of characters. This is true, for example, if the writer seeks dramatic irony. In this situation, when the reader knows what the character doesn't and it contributes to purpose and meaning for the story, limiting the points of view helps. But there is also the danger, when using multiple points of view, in diminishing the full characterization of a character. Any fictional prose story is set in constricted time, and every word and idea has to be prioritized for effectiveness. This is especially true in a short to mid-range length novel. Great characterization then requires dedication of time and space to the character for the reader to discover the depth of that character, and become engaged. My immediate reaction to your problem was that the characterization in your specific circumstance might be shallow (that's okay if you want it that way) so the plot can be properly advanced. At the moment of truth when the novel is finished, only you have total comprehension of what you're trying to accomplish, and at times teachers seem to fulfill their responsibilities by discovering a student's breaking the rules, which, of course, makes no sense when creating an original work of art. I'd stick with your gut feelings and get a few readers you trust to give you impressions of how your story flows and engages them . . . to bolster your confidence. Thanks for your comments. WHC

  6. david stringer Says:

    As usual, very informative. I have a question: I have written a novel (126,000 words) that tells the story of four main pov characters (using 3rd person limited pov for each). I am constantly told by "writing teachers" that using so many pov characters is a no-no, but deleting any one makes my story weaker in my opinion. Do you have any thoughts on this matter?

  7. admin Says:

    Your question is an interesting one and seems to stem from a good feeling of what you're trying to accomplish. There are a number of things you might think about. To start. Are you in scene, in the moment, rather than describing a scene in the past? If you are in scene, dialogue should flow naturally. In essence, you have the reader in the action, and the dialogue between characters should seem natural. However, if you're describing a scene so the reader feels they are being told about something in the past, to slip into dialogue can be awkward without a transition. So you'd have to be sure to carry the reader to the scene, depending on what the prose context is before you start the dialogue, or you should create the dialogue so the reader knows the narrator is delivering the dialogue in a way that is true and perfect for the story. The reader should be unaware of any problems, and you'll have to work hard in revision to be sure the reader doesn't stop and wonder about the storytelling. The whole topic of transitions is worth study. Transitions are needed from scene to scene, chapter to chapter–and are fairly obvious–but they also are needed between action events, between dialogue, and even between ideas. For example, you may be blocking a scene or setting a mood with description of environment, and then need narrative exposition of back story and/or dialogue, and you will have to structure the ideation so the reader reads effortless without sensing any break in the flow of the prose. Finally, always check the quality of your dialogue if it doesn't seem to be working. What is the purpose for dialogue at this time in the story? Is it there for exposition? If so, take it out. Would narrative passage be better? If so, revise. Are the ideas driving the dialogue compatible with the emotional valence of the scene? Is the dialogue credible? And, is the syntax and verbiage compatible with the character who is speaking? The idea for the dialogue has to be valid for the story. In a murder mystery, don't try to slip in ideas about global warming or the beauty of hummingbirds, for the most part. That makes the dialogue ineffective and ruins enjoyment of the story unity. It's a complex subject, one that good writers will struggle with their entire careers. Thanks for your comment and question. WHC

  8. aliyah Says:

    I think this website has been helpful. I was wondering if you could help me, I've started writing, but I find it hard to introduce dialogue after writing a descriptive paragraph. Could you suggest anything?

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  10. William Coles Says:

    Thanks for your comment. You seem to have an interesting and energetic approach. I encourage you to continue innovation. There is fascinating complexity to the piece you describe. Keep seeking successful work and don't worry about breaking rules. In today's market, original, serious writing with humor is sellable and enjoyed.
    I'll give you some general thoughts in the vein of what the website addresses. First, be sure you have a clear idea of what you want to accomplish. If you want to write memoir, you may want to discover the most effective techniques to make the memoir memorable and enjoyable. If you want to write a great story”and you can structure it to be like a memoir, your character in the first person giving his/her story for example”don't lose sight of what makes stories great: structure for a purpose, craft mastered for clarity, enjoyable prose conveying solid interactive ideas all in the dramatic context of conflict, action, and resolution and with some meaningful purpose to the writing. In the piece you're working on, you're writing about your life experience. As with any memoir based writing, you have to look deeply into the reason for writing it. Why would any life story be of an interest to anyone? Actually, in everyone's life story there probably is some core discovery of significance that would be valuable to a significant group of readers. The trick is discovering that value. So in your story, seek that real meaning, that valuable discovery about something significantly human that has happened that demands emphasis or enlightenment about what it is to be human, that drives you–as the author–to tell the story. For and example, in a presidential memoir, few readers want to hear about the details of a state dinner, or how he felt during the inaugural parade. What everyone wants to know is why would a President would do inexplicable things. What in his personality drove him to certain inexplicable behavior? If indeed, a President was a good enough author of memoir to write about motives, decisions, consequences, and discoveries (or failures to discover), that would be a significant, and fascinating, accomplishment. He would have found a core human value in his life that is different than most of us, and he could tell his story to focus his unique differences so it would have a significant impact on readers. I think this is valuable thinking for all writers writing from their own lives.
    Note that authors who write about their own lives tend to be restricted to–and feel comfortable in–describing the events that have happened as truthfully as possible. Yet, for the best story telling, the telling of story events needs the injection of imagination. And if the author really wants to write a significant story that will affect the reader, why not use fictional techniques to create the best story possible? It makes sense. And if that is done, why hamper yourself with describing the reality? Just create the story based on reality but using the powerful fictional techniques available. It would seem that this approach would make the great parts of one's life story the most significant and enjoyable for a reader, as a fictional story. So look to the possibility of just creating a great story, and don't get too bogged down that it stems from your own life. And consider removing yourself from the story”you can still have your character arguing with the author, it's just a new way of thinking about the author as not necessarily being everything you are. I believe you can do this without losing your creativity.
    Some other thoughts. First, don't worry too much about the POV. POV will become a problem only if you, as the author, lose control of the point of view and fail to make appropriate choices regarding the point of view. That's when the writing gets bad. Be sure the reader knows the point of view, however, and that the point of view is clear, and that transitions between points of view are controlled and seamless.
    Second, all writing is enhanced by humor. Even the most serious writing. But humor is one of the most difficult techniques to use well, and humor can take over or divert from the propose of the literary story. Good literary writing becomes bad writing when the humor takes over. Satire, and similar forms of humorous writing, requires it's own skills, skills that may compete with any real message of literary writing. Often, in literary fiction, the most effective humor is along the more subtle forms of irony, or neatly crafted similes. Or paradox. But never lose your sense of humor when writing, just refine it so that it will reach the most readers in the ways you desire. (There are few books on humor and irony listed on the site that you might enjoy.)
    And third, learn the rules. Of course you can break them. You can mix them together. You can bend them and change them. But every author needs to choose the guidelines by which he/she will create stories. Rules point the way, especially in the beginning. Learning to create stories to please readers is a lifelong process–a process that a good author really loves to learn, augment and alter. Above all, learn the rules to make abstract writing to concrete writing, to change fuzzy thinking to clear ideas, and to write fiction with action in scene events more often than summarized narrative telling and description. That's where it really all comes together.
    I hope this helps. And best wishes for a great career.
    WHC

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